Soyala Amaya

um...dear deity...what to say without sounding like a biotch...forget it, I'm cramping, here comes the vil twin. This was bad. Straight out. Cliche, over done, heard it a thousand times, ...

Interesting...very strange feelings I'm getting from this. Almost sexual but...your talking about your brother...not quite sure I understand where you're going. I like the schematics, although that se

First off, I think he meant 'siege', but that's a side issue. THis started off a bit a slow, repeating words right after one another pictureperfect white perfection in the ...

*comes in after too long away...and applauds Incandesence* Thank you! I was getting ready to rip this to pieces when I came along your bit there at the end. I'm ...

Over all, nice idea, but the poem itself I'm not a fan of. You seem to force the rhyme in several places by dragging out the lines, and the second ...

All right, I liked some of your descriptives, but over all, this didn't do much for me. This is actually the third time I've popped in here, and this is ...

*gives you the happyIveeatentomanyreessespiecessoImveryhyperandjustprobingthingsatthemoment dance* Delightful. As stated before, exsquisite use of and estensive vocabulary. Tell me, were these appelat

Well, I'm just popping in to say hallo. Hallo. Very nice first for the first of you and such, though I do have two comments/ A couple of your images ...

Brad, lovely piece, but I do have to agree with Gala on some points. The metaphors are dashing, but too vague…at least until we learned the story behind it. Then ...

I like the overall idea behind this, heh, in four days it will be three months since I lost someone myself, so this really hit a nerve, but I don't ...

Babe...I loved it, I really did, there's just one part that mixed me up Cause Run is the song on my stereo And I’ve wanted to do it too long. ...

Erm...I'm sorry, I didn't understand it. Though that's all right. I have a poem called "Welcome' that no one but me and my friends would understand. This poem might mean ...

All right...I'm sorry to say, I don't like it. I'm not a fan of that kind of style, really, the way some pieces seem to clunk out there while other ...

This is the kind of poem where you need to light a few candles, turn of the lights, close your eyes, and let someone you love whisper it in your ...

It's...a story. Stated in blatant feelings without leaving anything to the readers soul to imagine. Don't tell me, blindfold me like you did that girl, and let me smile as ...